Instead of double posting, learn how to use the edit button. And stop trying to bump your thread the whole time.
If people want to comment on it, they will no matter where on the page it is.
Consider it a warning.
About your last update, I think it looks a tad too blocky, esp. the shoulders look awkward. And the AA is blurry.
The shadowed cheek on yours is wrongly placed/highlighted compared to the other one.
I guess you can study Tremulant's edit a tad more and see what fails on yours.
But it's evolving nicely.