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Risenshiney
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Pearl Animation Crit
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July 21, 2017, 10:03:12 am
Hey, folks!
Anyone got anything to say about this before I continue?
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MysteryMeat
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Re: Pearl Animation Crit
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July 21, 2017, 11:18:15 am
Leg moves but shoe does not. Looks off that way, some slight squashing may help.
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http://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=19838.0
also go suggest on my quest, cmon
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Risenshiney
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Re: Pearl Animation Crit
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July 21, 2017, 11:35:37 am
As I thought.
Thanks!!
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Risenshiney
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Re: Pearl Animation Crit
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July 21, 2017, 11:58:43 am
Update! Hope its better now?
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Re: Pearl Animation Crit
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July 21, 2017, 12:12:00 pm
Your timing on everything is very stiff. All the action happens on the same frame. You might find it more interesting to offset the motion of some parts by a frame or two. Looking great though
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Risenshiney
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Re: Pearl Animation Crit
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July 21, 2017, 02:38:07 pm
Hmm, I did think of that a little...
Made a slight change to the dress, crown and zip/zipper. Has it made a tiny difference at least? Its a bit tricky...
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