Desert story (WIP)

[Ezil]

Aloha! I am currently in the understanding of the drawing background, and I need someone's help I would be very happy if somebody said that it would be possible to add/remove here. Thank you!

[jun]

_{Sorry, had to do this with a mouse, forgive the sloppiness}

Some thoughts on the composition, can be improved by a ton but should be a decent start.

[Ezil]

Wow, this is amazing! I thank you for your idea and help. I can use your idea as reference to change my drawing?

[jun]

Sure, do whatever to help yourself improve. 
I'd also suggest trying a few different variations and perhaps trying something completely different, too.
Have fun.