ANIME PLASTIC SURGERY GO!!
D:!!!
What have I done? She looks like an anorexic wtf scary thing now (she looks better in 2x though)
Just, stuff I did: I fucked up her hand (I'm using a computer mouse which just fails me, and I did the edit in paint, which killed me D:)
I emphasized the whites in her eye (it'd be good for her general expression if you could see both of her eyebrows, though, anyway, the eyes felt too shadowed by the hair)
I widened the mouth quite a bit (gives expression and personality)
and I anime:ed the nose (and gave it one (!) nostril and i apparently also gave her a cold since she's now red around the nose D;)
I also heightened her head for no reason at all, I should have made it smaller :(
Changed the angle of her neck so that she'd look more natural in her pose
and stuff.
One thing to think about when pixelling, work rough. You've put a lot of finish in the picture (which I have effectiely destroyed), anti-aliasing and so. stuff like that is nice to put in early in the picture (the oooh, I'm making it nice looking, yay-feeling), but it's even better to save that for the last touch and in the beginning just be sure that all the shapes are the way you want them.
So what I'm saying is that if there are any revamps you want to make with this image, go all on out and don't be afraid to destroy something beautiful you've already created in favor to replace it with something either nicer, or something that will make the picture, as a whole, work better.
And that's like, it :D cheers and goodo rucky, habu funny.
(oh, and of course, I, aside from destroying her nose, put it in the middle of her face (or at least, more then before) since even though anime noses are generally offset from the middle line of the face, trying to structure the face usually helps the balance and so on)