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Mario mushroom

on: August 24, 2008, 10:57:57 pm
This is one of my first pixel art:

I made it about month ago and I submitted it at PJ gallery and it is rejected(not that I am complaining or anything).I made a few changes but I still dont think it is good enough.I am out of ideas.How to make it better ???
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Re: Mario mushroom

Reply #1 on: August 26, 2008, 06:57:42 pm
You could try giving it some form!  You have a clear light source but its effect on your shapes is hardly seen.  You could also try pushing the design more, less mario ripoff and make it into something unique?
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