New one's much better, wex. And Atnas' edit is also an improvement, especially her left leg. The little one pixel gap between the top of her shoe and her hand really make the curve of her body much more obvious.
And is it a rule that pixel art should be totally readable at 1x all the time, even if it's meant to be viewed at 2x? I've kind've been saying "ah, it looks fine at 2x, though!" for some of my pixel art recently...should I be making sure everything's totally readable at its native resolution, too?
Edit: Wex posted right before I did. Yeah, sadly, I thought she was wearing pants, hence the reason I thought her leg was shaped funny in yours. You might wanna pull her skirt up one more pixel, and brighten it up a bit to make it more obvious what it was. I thought the black socks(?) were just shaded regions on her green pants.