Frankly it kicks ass, maybe this is why you're not getting replies
And working to old specs is my game. Think it was the forte of many others here too, at least way back.
But it's also hard to understand without context, like the water nymph lady being completely separate from the rest of the composition. In one context this breaks the comp, but in another it works.
Little kid looks way like Alex Kidd BTW, think you were inspired by the early 80s manga style? Almost spot on.