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Offline taarna23

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[WIP] First real sprite

on: December 30, 2007, 01:50:54 am
Hi there, I'm taarna, long time lurker, seldom poster.

Now, before I show you this, I'll tell you what I know needs help. I can't draw hands. I can't draw them on paper, and I can't draw them in pixels. I need them both positioned so that basically a layer can be added, and they're holding something. There are reasons, don't feel like going into it.

My line art, my inspiration, and I got bored and started colouring.




Please crit nice, I bruise easily. ^.^
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Re: [WIP] First real sprite

Reply #1 on: December 30, 2007, 12:06:44 pm
It looks like a good start to me; even though I'm not understanding too well what you're trying to do with the green stripes.
The only real criticism I would like to level is that your colors look too nice and childish. I suggest you make this less saturated, a bit more lik your inspiration pic :P

Good luck ^^