If you're looking for crits, what is going on with his legs? Is he kneeling on the ground or is he standing (but we're only seeing top half). If he is kneeling shouldn't we seem some legs and feet protuding at back. The wrist looks a bit long on his right arm. Any reason why he's leaning to his right? Also, would he be like, "Doc, I keep gettingthis burning senstation when i pee" .....
. . I'm not sure I wanna know how his crotch got on fire. .