Holy crap that looks sweet. Dr Feng, do u actually play Warhammer 40K? Cuz it looks like you know a lot about the subject just by looking at the pic. (I play quite a bit myself with friends and such.). Any way you would continue this game?
Got a couple crits. Hope you don't mind that I did an edit for you, because I rather like them.(Just modified the first two)Main things I changed:Move the crotch up, lengthened the legs.Increased the contrast on the colors greatly.Lowered the contrast on the gun colors, to set them apart from the character.Repositioned the legs slightly, pulled them backwards, to line up the character's center of gravity.Changed the shading to have the light coming from above and slightly to the left.Put a shadow under the gun and arms, to pop them out and push the lower torso back slightly.Added a bit more armor detail.Changed the hands so that they're about the same size.Moved the head down and back a bit.Changed the visor to look a bit deeper.Made the shoulder plate larger and higher up.That's pretty much it, took about eight minutes or so. Hopefully it'll be helpful!