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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Base Character [C+C]
« on: February 28, 2015, 01:19:40 am »
Quote from: Friend on February 28, 2015, 12:10:56 am
depicting shy can lead to awesomely poignant poses.  however, even if youre going for stiff, it has to be organic.  Humans only look robotic when actually trying to look exactly that.  think about how the entie body truthfully reacts.  im a shy person. my shoulders raise and turn inward, , back bent forward, my head is slightly downturned, feet slightly inward, i often cover one arm of the other tightly, my facial expression usually has a tensed brow. (but there are so many more complex ways to represent all kinds of emotions.  For instance, sometimes when anxious I might try to appear more confident with a squarer poster, head held up high, yet anyone with good body language observation could see on my upturned head is still a face struggling to be relaxed) see, it's a lot more organic than robot straight everything and a blank expression  ::)  it's up to you to decide how much life you want to breathe into it, as well as how you but you should at least strive for a basic representation of what emotion you want to achieve when expressing them. 

sorry for the wall of text  :-[

This was of great help, I'm already improving it and trying to make it more human, losing stiffness and whatnot, thank you for your critiques  :)

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Base Character [C+C]
« on: February 27, 2015, 09:28:23 pm »
Quote from: Willabee on February 27, 2015, 09:23:31 pm
*deep breathing* I lerve it!!!! Just saying...
I don't feel like anything is off. At least not to me. ... Now for other skin tones ;P (Don't forget Martian)
Quote from: Friend on February 27, 2015, 06:15:01 pm
don't worry about how many views or comments.  be happy you are creating :]  don't stop or get discouraged.  breakthroughs can always be just around the corner to an open mind.

it might be hard for comments without knowing what you are going for.  is there anything you dislike about your current versions?  personally i find the first is pretty great, except the arms in the first pose are too beefy.  i like the look in the second pose.

the second base looks too robotic; stiff, both in the anatomy and in the pose

Thank you for your inspiring and kind words, I'll try to improve the second character's pose (I intend to do a lot of "personalities", like this would be a more shy type of guy)

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Pixel Art / [WIP] Village House [C+C]
« on: February 26, 2015, 08:04:20 pm »
My first attemp at making a house, expecting some C+C please  :)





Shiinta

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] RPG base character [C+C]
« on: February 26, 2015, 04:40:11 pm »
Quote from: Angelonias on February 26, 2015, 12:07:41 pm
The first one i like more. He look more badass. Try putting dem clothes on :y:

I draw them without clothes first so I can customize stuff later  ;D

Also, 250 views and 1 comment? Is it that bad?  :-[

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Pixel Art / [WIP] Base Character [C+C]
« on: February 26, 2015, 03:33:47 am »
Hello guys, it's me once again, I'm here to post a base character I just made and would love some C+C.

The left state is his standing/idle pose, and the right one would be sort of holding his sword ready to unsheath it.


Edit: Made a base for a game like Harvest Moon



Shiinta.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Bedroom[C+C]
« on: February 25, 2015, 12:55:39 pm »
Quote from: Seiseki on February 25, 2015, 06:50:03 am
The perspective shows the top of the walls, so you should see the top of the monitor, wall socket, etc. too!
You need more shadows.
The black outlines ruins the 3D feel.



Oh, I got it now. Great edit of my art too, now I have a better idea of how to improve my perspective, thanks!  ;D

Quote from: Decroded on February 25, 2015, 07:36:46 am
Razer Goliathus mousepad doesn't fit on ur desk?  :lol:

I wonder where the bed is supposed to fit here.
Is that a big wardrobe on the right? Why choose a perspective we can't see what it is?

Perhaps a panoramic photo/s of the room would help get some accuracy.

It does'nt  :-[ I bought the bigger size heh, and I didn't choose a bad perspective, I'm new to this so I kinda just went drawing it (and it made sense since I know my bedroom, sorry)

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Bedroom[C+C]
« on: February 25, 2015, 04:09:53 am »
Quote from: Wes on February 25, 2015, 02:44:46 am
I find your piece really confusing: particularly the door on the right and all the stuff going on over there. What are you trying to do there? Is it a closet door casting a shadow? The perspective makes very little sense.

The right wall is covered by a closet, it starts on the north wall and extends to the right one

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Bedroom[C+C]
« on: February 25, 2015, 01:39:47 am »
Quote from: Kazuya Mochu on February 24, 2015, 10:26:24 pm
I sugest you look at isometric pixel art as well. people seem to like to use that for interiors

stuff like this for example (not mine)


Thanks for replying, even though I think isometric is beautiful, I prefer not to use (at least for now)

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Pixel Art / [WIP]Bedroom[C+C]
« on: February 24, 2015, 08:02:34 pm »
Hello guys, my nickname is Shiinta as you can see and I am new here on this forum, I am also new at pixel art so I might be missing the basics, anyways, since I'm starting with this beautiful kind of art that I always appreciated I guessed why not make something I adore doing? (that is drawing buildings, furniture etc)



Anyways, this is my bedroom (in real life) but as its a WIP it is missing some stuff (like a bed heh).
I want to know what you guys think of it, how can I improve it, any critique will be accepted.

Also, sorry for the bad english, I'm a self-taught english speaker.

Shiinta.

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