Thanks for the edits, that's helpful guys. I think I'll fix the sel-out problem, but I don't know about the hair. I tried to keep the palette low and make it interesting, according to color/light theory the hair should be okay, if you want to make suggestions or edit the palette on the hair feel free, I want this one to be right. I kind of like the shading on the hair, though I know it's a bit noisy, what do you think would look more natural?