This is the title screen, but there doesn't seem to be a way to start the game, are you taking that into account?
What you have is way too busy. You need to think about visual priority and clarity of idea.
I didn't touch the chrome font but as is it's too intense, too attention grabbing.
Also, how did you not think of this bread font???
Simplify! Or, draw everything out beforehand... but the more complex you want it, the harder it's gonna be to manage competing elements.
Who is the star of the show? Well, he's being drowned out by everything else. If you squint your eyes and noone told you where to look, you'd think the black guy is the main character.
If I understand correctly, this isn't actually a game, you're just practicing title screens right?
He needs a more dynamic pose, something like
this. I know that's a villain but the pose is still valid.