in response to that last comment, i strongly urge you to learn to draw traditionally, and then find your own way to simplify without trying to fit into somebody else's style. how to draw manga, baka neko, polykarbon are all great resources, and if you are looking to get into comic art i would recommend how to draw comics the marvel way if you can find a copy, but all of it just as inspiration. you should find your own way. everything you learn from websites and books are just going to be habits youll have to break later on. your design is good, but the core drawing is lacking. study the basic shapes of a face and have another go