hmm... being that you are using shadows so heavily, you might consider:
A)dimming the stomach area
B)dim the < leg (like the left edits)
C)add more darker shading to the breasts, to give them more depth. Also < foot seems rather messy, clearer AAing might help.
D)shortening her legs, they're rather long compared to the body...very long
I do, however, think the pic is quite good. The outfit is neat and so is the pose.