ok i spent ages writting a pretty detailed crit, but somehow the page refreshed and what I wrote disappeared so I'll try make it short and sweet.
Im not sure whether you're trying to be cartoony about this, if so I really would focus on exagerating your main features. But I'd really like to see you really experiment with ways to trick the eye into seeing certain details in a such a small space. With your colours I recon you can afford to be a bit more creative to hint shapes and tones etc.. All in all you seem to be very calculated with this, adding the rims of your glasses, the colour of your eyes and focusing solely on the symetrics of the face. Loosen up and dont be afraid to experiment.
well keep it up.
Aarg I know how it feels to have your page of crits lost..
Thank you for your comments and the edit!
No, im not trying to do this cartoony. Im allways afraid to experiment.. and I know I shouldnt.. today ill try to, before I continue with the cap etc..
Im not sure if I look like I really look in your edit, but it shows me alot of ways I can use my colors better I think! Also I really like the hair you did, it has way more body than mine..
Ill start working on this again this afternoon (Europe time..)
Greets,
Lollige