These are filled with a lot of wonk, actually. It's obvious that your skills in actual drawing are solid, so you should indulge a bit in the nature of the pixel cluster. Check out helm's ramblethread, cause I don't really have the time to edit of give good crits, but I'd like to! ' U ';;,
Anyways, this looks nice, but it could look a lot nicer @ n @;, I'll see what I can do later, ok?