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Roberto.

on: September 20, 2006, 01:06:53 pm
Haven't been able to post any work recently due the large amount of assessment I've been receiving at school lately, but now that I've failed it all I'm able to pixel again. introducing, Roberto!
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6 colours including black and white. I'm not really sure how long this picture took as i did it intermediately while writing bad essays.

« Last Edit: September 22, 2006, 06:27:51 am by Meta|Fox »
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Re: Roberto.

Reply #1 on: September 20, 2006, 04:44:03 pm
dommo arigoto mister roboto... but yeah :P I give it a thumbs up :y: hell I'de even give it a kiss :-* I'm crazy I know :crazy: but yeah great peice I like the dithering I like the shading I like the texture I LOVE THE WHOLE THING lol :lol:
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Re: Roberto.

Reply #2 on: September 20, 2006, 04:46:40 pm
I'd love it if you posted some critique, besides smileys.
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Re: Roberto.

Reply #3 on: September 20, 2006, 04:53:47 pm
I just simply critisize this, it's too good
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Re: Roberto.

Reply #4 on: September 20, 2006, 05:29:53 pm
No, it's not. Please reconsider your usage of the forum. If you cannot see anything wrong with this, then neither your art nor your critical eye are a boon to this forum.

Meta: You should probably AA from black a bit more, the lineart still 'shows' under the coloring, suggesting a lack of overal coherency in coloring. Nearly every pure black detail calls for smoothing as I see it.

How about a neck? Strange without.

The burst of the gun is a bit more symbolic than I sense you were going for. Muzzle flash from an energy gun would probably be better shaped from an oval-shaped basic form, no?
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Re: Roberto.

Reply #5 on: September 20, 2006, 05:37:23 pm
ok heres some critique he looks like hews been stabbed through the hand and the weapon is smoking, plus he looks like he's yelling in pain
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Re: Roberto.

Reply #6 on: September 20, 2006, 05:48:43 pm
Actually, that's just offering observations, I couldn't make out any constructive critique.
As for me, I'd have to agree with Helm about the black.
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Re: Roberto.

Reply #7 on: September 20, 2006, 06:23:58 pm
I think there's a conflict in the shading on the torso; the front part looks like the lightsource is way over to the left, but the little highlight part to the right of that suggests a nearer lightsource. Same for the head; there's a highlight on the front of his face, but there's also one to the bottom-right of the jaw. I think this makes the form of him look flat and "embossed" if you see what I mean.
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Re: Roberto.

Reply #8 on: September 22, 2006, 06:23:28 am
Hrm,
did a quick edit

Anybetter?
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