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Offline Scissorfins

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[C+C][WIP]Bacterial Ghost

on: July 14, 2011, 11:16:43 am
Hello. New to pixel art, I've been working on this character sprite but have hit a wall. Though I can see it still needs work I don't know which direction I need to move in to improve it. Any and all comments or criticisms would be welcomed and appreciated.

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Re: [C+C]Bacterial Ghost

Reply #1 on: July 14, 2011, 12:32:52 pm
:huh:

hmm, okay

What is it you're trying to convey here, exactly? It's not very readable. So far I see what looks like a skull attached to a foot-shaped trail of red smoke by a... Blue thing?

The head and body seem to be drawn in two different styles. These, along with a poorly chosen palette almost makes it seem like you took the skull off of something else and pasted it on. (That's just me, I tend to be suspicious.) Either that or its body was drawn in 15 rushed seconds before you had to leave for something.

I've been trying to make edits in the past 15 minutes but I can't get it to look good because I have only a vague idea of what you want this to be, and the skull doesn't look that good honestly.
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Re: [C+C]Bacterial Ghost

Reply #2 on: July 14, 2011, 01:37:19 pm
Thank you for the response.

The premise behind the sprite is a man who has come back from the dead as an amoeba or bacteria. The body is meant to be some sort of single cell organism, the blue thing it's nucleus which is partly hanging out of the jawless skull.

The discrepancy between the body and skull is because I spent most of my time working on the skull and not so much on the body. I had clear concept for the skull but wasn't so sure what to do for the body. I had the general outline in my head but not the actual details. I'll find some single-cell references and work on it. Another cause for discrepancy is that a skull is 3 dimensional while an amoeba is generally perceived as flat, not really relevant to your case since you had no idea what I was going for but it's something for me to a chew on.

As for my color palate, I'm a complete amateur when it comes to colors and my color choices are probably why it's not very readable. I chose most of the colors randomly, especially the nucleus. Not sure why I made it blue to be honest. I'll do some experimenting with the colors as I work on this, although I thought my color choice for the skull was decent but maybe I was mistaken?

Quote from: pistachio
and the skull doesn't look that good honestly.
Can you elaborate on this?
« Last Edit: July 14, 2011, 01:45:21 pm by Scissorfins »

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Re: [C+C][WIP]Bacterial Ghost

Reply #3 on: July 14, 2011, 08:22:22 pm

some sort of jelly with skull inside of it.
Something like Tartakovsky "amoeba boys"
« Last Edit: July 14, 2011, 08:25:00 pm by Koyot1222 »