32x32 Sprite for sidescroller (ongoing, feedback requested)

[vvight]

Hi there,

This is my first post. I have been making pixel art for rpg makers such as OHRRPGCE since ~2000, and it is only recently that I have begun working in sizes larger than 16x16 pixels. I am finding it challenging to make a decent sprite that doesn't look anatomically "wack" at 32x32. I have been blocking out the basic body parts by colour and have come up with this:



I am looking for feedback on the pose, dimensions of body parts and general advice. Also, "Hi Pixelation!"  . I felt that this place would be better for feedback than pixeljoint, as the forums there don't seem to be as active and the focus is more on "accomplished" pixel art ie not as beginner friendly.

I aim to use this thread to demonstrate ongoing progress with this particular sprite and I invite any and all feedback and help.

Many thanks in advance.

[Gil]

Maybe a quick question: if you feel like your anatomy feels off in these bigger pieces, you could show us some of your anatomy sketches on paper? Those give a much better indication of what your current skill level with anatomy is like and how to structure our critiques around that knowledge.

[vvight]

Hi,

Unfortunately I don't have access to a scanner right now. I've noticed that my problem seems to be the length of the arms and the angles of legs, as well as torso shape. Basically proportions. I'm going to be working more on this sprite today, after which I'll upload some more images and perhaps it will become more apparent. Thankyou for your reply.

[vvight]

Thoughts?

Fixed your links. Make sure to directly link to the image. - Atnas

[Decroded]

Add vertical movement

[Gil]

I'm not sure if it's supposed to be a run or a walk. With a run, you want at least some frames where he is completely in the air. Right now, you always have him contacting the floor with at least one foot. And what Decroded said, you have to move the rest of the body up/down.

[Shanenopolis]

Here's what it should look like with a little bit of vertical movement:

[Gil]

I like the slo-mo. Looks like he's either in an epic montage or running away from a giant explosion

[Shanenopolis]

I like the slo-mo. Looks like he's either in an epic montage or running away from a giant explosion

I was tempted to tilt his body a little bit and speed it up, but there's something rather graceful about his pointed toes and upright posture. Like a beautiful swan in an Olympic track meet.

[Decroded]

At this speed we see arms move too linearly.
We want a nice pendulum/sin wave effect which means ease-in ease-out with big movement through the middle.