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Pixel Art / Re: Reading on the Porch [WIP]
« on: January 12, 2010, 10:20:25 pm »
Scary, he looks exactly like my math teacher from 10th grade.

The shirt and book look flat compared to the rest of his body, so maybe add an extra light shade for highlights?
The issue with the way he's sitting is that his torso appears to be slouching partially forward and partially to the side, but his legs are pointing straight at you. With the way you drew him the legs would also have to be facing partially to the side. I'm not sure what orientation the chair will be in, but making a sketch of it would definitely help you with his body.
You want to move his book hand more to the left. Try posing and you'll see what I mean  :P

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Pixel Art / Re: Namesake
« on: January 12, 2010, 07:07:41 am »
I like the design of his hair and boots  :)

The hand holding the sword looks crooked and tense, as if he were just punching the hilt instead of holding it.
His chest is a little confusing; I can't tell his right hand apart from his belt. Maybe you can also take out a few stripes out from the vest design?
I think his chest also needs to be more 3-dimensional. That might make the design more realistic.

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Pixel Art / Character sketch
« on: January 11, 2010, 02:06:58 am »
Hey guys :D I'm not exactly new to pixelling, but I have a lot to learn ...
Well, here's a character I made a while ago. I'm not really satisfied with the hair and the arms on the walking animation, but I'm not sure as to how to go about fixing it :(

Any critiques would be appreciated!




Edit: Fixed it up a little ...

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