I like the newest one a lot, but I feel like it loses something with the other arm missing. the wing pose is great, but maybe something like what Evil was suggesting with the raised arm. Also, with that same version, have you tried shifting the title itself around? I feel that the screen would flow more nicely if it was more in the lower left area. I think the form of the wing draws my eye to that area, and then it is just blank. Also, it is covering up your other arm, so it could benefit you there as well.