I tried fixing the head first:
I kinda had to turn her head a bit so that it's more facing towards us. The only other way I could figure to do it is redrawing her in profile.
I'm not too sure I quite got the look right, though. @__@ And I don't think I fixed the shading on it.
Then there's the edited pallet for her shirt, which I'm none too fond of. Guess I'll have to tinker with it for a while.
It'd be nice if someone could give pointers on how to fix the shading of the shirt, too.