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[WIP] Horus, The God of Sky
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Grynz
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[WIP] Horus, The God of Sky
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February 26, 2007, 01:10:01 am
Early WIP. Need C+C on anatomy, and some ideas to make the piece more impressive.
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That One Guy
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Re: [WIP] Horus, The God of Sky
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February 26, 2007, 04:57:49 am
Hey there, Grynz. Right now, just a glaring imperfection in this piece is the fact that he has 4 abs. I like it otherwise, but I'm not into the whole anatomy thing.
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Wakka
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Re: [WIP] Horus, The God of Sky
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February 26, 2007, 05:36:50 am
We need more to actually critique. However, please do fix the abs. And I like his hand/fingers. Very nice.
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Colonel Mustard
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Re: [WIP] Horus, The God of Sky
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February 26, 2007, 06:32:58 am
Horus is normally illustrated as a man with a falcons head, so what I'd suggest you do first is change the lineart to reflect that.
Like this perhaps:
http://www.hieroglyphen-info.de/bilder/goetter/horus.jpg
I'm more of a fan of the stargate designs of Horus though,
http://screenshots.filesnetwork.com/69/files2/40436_1.jpg
is a more developed one.
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