Hi !
i like the idea so i messed a little with colors. Don't take it as an advice, i'm training by editing
The things i messed with :
Shape : i did rearrange some parts like the chin, the nose and the mouth so as to get more rational volumes.
Light & Shadow : That's a very good sprite style you have since it requires that you mentally compute the lightining sources and shadow in a detailed fashion. Very good excercise and very interesting as the lights can enhance or lower some part as you want to emphasis on it. I added some shadows to get more contrast. I also added highlights on the edges of the left part, but can't say if it's relevant or not
Colors : i added more shades and a little AA but i think that's very subjective
Good luck with this !
« Last Edit: March 20, 2016, 11:37:15 am by metachaos »
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