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sharprm
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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out
Reply #10 on:
November 29, 2006, 01:56:06 am
On the second zombies back there seems to be some pixels that shouldn't be there. Looks like you were going to have the
arm going back then changed it but forgot to remove the sleeve. The third zombie maybe should have an eye or some blood in its
eye socket. It looks at the moment like the face is all dried up or something and that doesn't fit with the amount of blood coming out
of the waist. Nice pose for the batter.
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eqko
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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out
Reply #11 on:
November 29, 2006, 08:25:18 am
Those pixels on the back (assuming you mean the ones near his neck) are supposed to be a hood from his sweater ...
As for the crawling one, I see where you're coming from.
I'll think about how to solve that as i really do like how his face is right now.
Apart from that, the stuff coming out the back are supposed to be largely intestines rather that large amounts of blood.
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hidden killer
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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out
Reply #12 on:
November 29, 2006, 09:17:51 am
its awesome and creepy
maybe add a lil background and i think its time u move them to the right positions
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eqko
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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out
Reply #13 on:
December 03, 2006, 06:43:50 pm
so, time for another update. I positioned them in the correct order (about time)
I also started the environment which is still VERY rough mind you, but it gives an idea about the direction I'm thinking of heading.
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ep
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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out
Reply #14 on:
December 03, 2006, 08:12:15 pm
Looking very nice, I like the crawling guy before but the red on the mouth seems too much like lipstick then blood. Maybe add some rips on the back of his clothes instead of adding blood to the face. Also to me it just screams firehydrant behind the hero. Not really sure why maybe just as a balance but it seems to need something with how packed the right is and a fire hydrant would work on a street. (so would a lamp though)
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eqko
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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out
Reply #15 on:
December 03, 2006, 08:36:36 pm
good comments, was kinda thinking the same about the blood on the crawler ... will most likely remove that in the next edit.
firehydrant is a great idea, will see what I can do about that, my own Idea was indeed a lamppost ...
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Rydin
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Re: zombies man ... they freak me out
Reply #16 on:
December 03, 2006, 09:48:04 pm
It is coming along very nicely. Great job on the clothing folds and basic zombie anatomy. It think you could get rid of the shadow on the poster/notice; right now it looks like its out the same level as the zombies, when it should seem farther back and against the wall. I agree with ep on the lipstick thing; maybe make it dripping more. Good luck on the trees and shrubbery in the background. I can't wait to see what this will look like when it is done.
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