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Peyton
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WIP Tileset
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May 12, 2015, 06:25:20 pm
Hey guys, this is a crosspost of a thread from Pixeljoint. I am posting it here in hopes of receiving additional feedback. I have another version of this at home that I plan to upload later tonight. I would do it now, but I am on a school computer and don't have the file.
What I've been told needs to be fixed
Contrast on grass
Grass tile textures
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Zia
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Re: WIP Tileset
Reply #1 on:
May 12, 2015, 07:27:45 pm
If your platforms are going to be that large, I'd add some interest in the center - maybe little holes with flowers or just some rocks. Those are really large areas of flat brown in the center.
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Re: WIP Tileset
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May 12, 2015, 09:43:19 pm
Grass doesnt mesh too well with the much darker plain dirt tiles. It all looks good though, you just gotta unify it.
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Peyton
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Re: WIP Tileset
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May 12, 2015, 10:16:43 pm
I am working on adding some stuff to break up the monotony a little bit, though it will be a while until there is enough to be sufficient.
I adjusted the colors of the grass a bit to see if that helps too.
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Zia
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Re: WIP Tileset
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May 13, 2015, 01:02:33 am
What if you did something like this with your colours and just made everything generally a bit more vibrant and darker?
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Peyton
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Re: WIP Tileset
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May 13, 2015, 03:42:12 am
That's an interesting take on it, but I am going for a different aesthetic with warmer colors, so I don't think I will take that path.
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Re: WIP Tileset
Reply #6 on:
May 13, 2015, 01:14:59 pm
I quite like the aesthetic you've got going on here so far, bright and moody at the same time. Interesting.
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Peyton
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Re: WIP Tileset
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May 13, 2015, 10:27:47 pm
More tiles. Edited the colors a bit, and added more variations of tiles.
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Re: WIP Tileset
Reply #8 on:
May 19, 2015, 11:04:36 pm
More stuff. I tried to fix the grass a little bit and make the tunnel backdrop more separated from the foreground. I'm probably going to need to remake the rocks and long grass.
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Re: WIP Tileset
Reply #9 on:
May 24, 2015, 03:50:36 am
You're doing really well imo I like the faded colour of the cave background.
can I suggest to tone down the saturation of the background colour its a bit off-putting.
I like the variation in the grass by adding tufts.
I suggest for the longer grass don't use the brightest green much/at all because it gives it too much priority inferring its interactive/solid.
Please animate the flame and surrounding tiles :-)
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