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Pixel Art / Re: Game boy background.
« on: October 02, 2016, 08:09:54 am »
Looks like rocks more than leaves. And in hindsight i am not sure why i mentioned it, my only excuse is that i am on pain meds rn
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Pixel Art / Re: Portraits
« on: October 02, 2016, 05:06:37 am »
Two things: Eyes are very square and the bottom edge of the chin is too wide, giving it a square appearance. Try to slim it a bit, and reshape the eyes some!
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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Airship Captain
« on: October 02, 2016, 05:05:13 am »
Crotch is dangling a bit too low, I'd say. when fully extended the elbow should touch home right as the waist starts.
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Pixel Art / Re: Warrior
« on: October 02, 2016, 12:23:16 am »
I'd say number 2, looks snappier. It still has that feeling of an incomplete movement though, like the swing's not gone all the way it needs to.
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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] First Pixel Art Characters
« on: October 01, 2016, 10:49:57 pm »
The anatomy looks pretty stylized and nonhuman so there's really not much I can critique here.
I'd say use the turnaround of Winston from overwatch though, you seem to be going for a vaguely gorrila-esque look for this character so it might be worthwhile to check him out as a visual aid.
The shading on the abdomen makes his chest look concave, try to soften that some! And also look into fixing the light source, your shading is kind of all over the place here! Set up a circle and use that as a guide for where the light would fall.
I'd say use the turnaround of Winston from overwatch though, you seem to be going for a vaguely gorrila-esque look for this character so it might be worthwhile to check him out as a visual aid.
The shading on the abdomen makes his chest look concave, try to soften that some! And also look into fixing the light source, your shading is kind of all over the place here! Set up a circle and use that as a guide for where the light would fall.
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Pixel Art / Re: Game boy background.
« on: October 01, 2016, 09:25:20 pm »
Here, a few ideas. Remember, one of the colors isn't a real color but a transparency! Try to keep that in mind when drawing!
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Pixel Art / Re: Warrior
« on: October 01, 2016, 09:17:04 pm »
Some small tweaks, felt like it was missing a frame and didn't stop at the right point to me!
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Pixel Art / Re: pegasus animation, looking for some feedback (WIP)
« on: October 01, 2016, 07:33:16 pm »
Good stuff! That windup frame helps immensely!
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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Mushroom
« on: September 30, 2016, 02:41:39 am »
@rydin there's actually a lot of crustier-looking mushrooms, like these beauties here:
Given that, I'd say the texturing is fine as it is, perfectly accurate to real life.
That light source is a good spot though, the light really should be hitting more from the right from how it's affecting the bark!
Another thing I just noticed is that the grass seems to be clipping weird over the stem of the mushroom, with the base further back and the tip in front of it with little done to imply depth in that blade of grass. Might help to look at that a bit!
Given that, I'd say the texturing is fine as it is, perfectly accurate to real life.
That light source is a good spot though, the light really should be hitting more from the right from how it's affecting the bark!
Another thing I just noticed is that the grass seems to be clipping weird over the stem of the mushroom, with the base further back and the tip in front of it with little done to imply depth in that blade of grass. Might help to look at that a bit!
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Pixel Art / Re: Extremely shaded Homestuck sprite
« on: September 30, 2016, 01:34:51 am »
No, more like this. i reduced the contrast so it has a less greasy, slicked appearance and removed an un-needed extra shade on the highlights.
Skin can be reflective but usually it's kind of a dull material.