Don't shout at me. I used it as a refrence. Thats what i got told to do to get better. So if you arent going to help, please dont post in here again
If you are going to copy other people's pixel art without crediting them and without bothering to learn the fundamentals, and do nothing but pester people about software that has a manual and extensive coverage in the pixelation tutorials, then I would suggest that YOU don't post in here again. If you don't want to hear tough feedback, then this is probably not the right board for you. If you think advice isn't helpful, then this definitely isn't the right board for you.
Your piece is so full of pillowshading and unplanned detail that it is very clear you are just copying someone else's stuff, and not even studying the parts that they shaded properly, much less thinking about the structure and trying to improve on their work. My comments were intended to derail this approach to "art". If you want to make art, observe REAL LIFE, PHOTOGRAPHS, and the TECHNIQUES OF PROFESSIONALS to guide you, not random half-finished pieces that will perpetuate the bad habits you've already formed.
Also, if someone told you to look at Grindie's piece for reference, then A) they simply shouldn't have said that, and B) you clearly should not have listened to them. If you are unable to tell even what you should be emulating, then you have some serious thinking and studying to do. Sketch, paint, practice, and above all THINK. These are the things that will further your skills and talents!