hello everyone! as the topic's name says, i have some problems with painting people (cartoonish or not). I hope that someone can explain well, how can i fix my simple character. it's better to show on a sketch, please, cause it might be hard for me to understand just from words.
and if you need, here is the description of the character: he is stout a little, he wears a cap, a sweater, and jeans with a belt.

please, just show me how it must be

he is a vampire at your picture too ><

but still thank you very much, now i understand how to fix and may be even repaint my ahem...vampire dude

hello, people  
really interested in drawing simplest 1 bit things like that man below.
may be someone know how to make it looking better, and how to transport the pose and the emotions using a small amout of free space, and only 2 colours.
please, help me to fix him, all advises and hard critiques are welcome



a viewer must see a man sitting on a chair with his left leg lying on the right one, and also he is holding a mug of tea in his right hand.
help this man to get closer to the discription

oh, later that picture can become an animation, so please any advises in that topic too

Thanks, i will return after some trainings