The platform seem out of perspective. Almost like it's leaning too far forward.
Also, some shadows under the creatures would pull it all together.
Nice project you got there.
creatures are nice. could all be hugely improoved very quickly cuz the drawing underneath is good. the creatures mostly suffer from poor contrast and weak shading. no time to do a complete edit but here r ideas
I think you're just used to a very subdued palette.. It takes time to adjust.It's not only the contrast, but the hues aren't very vibrant.The edit looks good to me, settling for something in between seems like a step back.
i'd say the contrast is still a bit too low, the colors still too murky, but it's whatever looks good to your eye bro i dont think my version has too much contrast, but i envision your art to be more vibrant perhaps something like this i wish i had more time, but i could come back later if you want ^^ it's not really a problem of your base colors but how you choose light tones and shadows that cause everything to be murky.
Quote from: dpixel on January 14, 2016, 05:40:51 pmAlso, some shadows under the creatures would pull it all together.You're right, and to be honest I'd not even thought about that. I'll work some shadows in to the engine tomorrow.