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Messages - Koi Kami Mauro
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Pixel Art / Re: Ghostopus!
« on: April 07, 2009, 01:13:25 am »
I meant to position the light spot more like in EvilEye's edit. I do believe it would help.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Moai Statue for PixelJoint
« on: April 07, 2009, 12:40:58 am »
Here, I changed the face to get him closer to the photo. The photo is actually two different statues- I took the head I liked the most and the Body I liked the most, and joined them.


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Pixel Art / Re: Ghostopus!
« on: April 06, 2009, 11:45:30 pm »
I may be wrong, but I believe if you keep the highlights of the first version while changing the highlight of his head (I beleve that's the noggin?) to be more of an upwards light, it would work. Sorry if I didn't word it well.

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Pixel Art / [WIP] Moai Statue for PixelJoint
« on: April 06, 2009, 09:45:53 pm »
So myeah, PixelJoint's contest this week is to make a Moai Statue.



Here is my WIP. Anything wrong with the shaping?

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Pixel Art / Re: zabord bird
« on: April 03, 2009, 04:14:11 pm »
I'd dull the brightest green a little. Right now, it's too bright, it even pains me a little.



I did this quick edit to dull out the colors.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] - Smooth dancer
« on: March 28, 2009, 10:18:33 pm »
I'dd say the hat is too shaded. The rest of the sprite is quite light, and all of a sudden the hat is mostly shadow.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Character Sheet.
« on: March 21, 2009, 04:48:18 pm »





Yeah, finally found a use for this sprite sheet. MSN emoticons. XD

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] ► Forum logotype
« on: March 20, 2009, 08:32:34 pm »
I'dd suggest adding the... bevel? the thing you had originally in the letters. Damned language barrier. The Perspective? Right now it's a bit hard to read.

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Pixel Art / Re: [wip] Noob requesting critique
« on: March 15, 2009, 02:35:35 pm »
I don't think he looks like such a blue smudge. He looks fine at 1x. You could maybe work a little at the shaping, especially on his left leg.

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Pixel Art / Re: CGA Hand Cyclops
« on: March 14, 2009, 01:14:41 pm »
Not a critique on technique (I don't know enough of that), but on shape- The eye looks weirdly positioned in the hand. Let me explain- it's perfectly rounded, and shaded like it has a light on it.



I crudely edited it to show what I mean. The eye has been given a more natural shape, with skin folds and creases around. The shading of the eye has been put to correspond with that of the hand.

Just my 2 cents :D hope it helps.

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