Hello, I have been browsing this site for sometime and decided to finally join.
This is a battle screen mock-up I made for an RPG I'm (very slowly) working on.
This battle is supposed to be a dramatic one where the enemy (the protagonist's brother)
falls off the cliff.
Any feedback is appreciated. I'm having trouble getting the clouds to look like clouds...
Also pay no attention to the doodle face down there. It is only a placeholder until I can draw proper faces.
edit: took out the menu things and added some detail to the water.