lol, I've looked at your mockup, ptoing, several times now. Each time I thought to myself "Cool. Looks nice, but when is he going to add the characters" It wasn't untill I realized that pillar was a skinny tiny ladder, then i was like "OOOHH! *THOSE* are characters?!"
I'm not entirely sure if thats a good thing. Such a large screen with barely visible/recognizable characters