David, you know exactly what we're going to say when you ask for critique, or post this and most of your art in the critique section: clean up the jaggies and fight for completion! I know it's a style thing, but it feels like it's kinda' gone ignored sometimes, and needs some cleaning up. So far, you got some good volumes going on, and a great layout, but for once, please finish it...
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...please.