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Re: Morning Watchman --WIP

Reply #10 on: September 24, 2006, 12:37:05 am
His chin is massive :wah: Move his lips down a tad. His nose is diminutive in a way that sharply contrasts his very masculine jaw, I think making it a tad more expansive/long/interesting would do well for the piece.

Keep it up.
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Re: Morning Watchman --WIP

Reply #11 on: September 24, 2006, 02:19:35 am
One last update before bed: !yus!

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Re: Morning Watchman --WIP

Reply #12 on: September 24, 2006, 04:20:35 am
I feel like the vertical dark gray lines in the neck are too harsh, bringing them to attention faster than the space they're supposed to be representing the shadow of.

Er... yeah. They flatten the image and distract a bit methinks.
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Re: Morning Watchman --WIP

Reply #13 on: September 28, 2006, 02:48:30 am
EDIT:  The weeks busy.  It's not much, but it's progress.
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Re: Morning Watchman --WIP

Reply #14 on: September 28, 2006, 05:24:27 am
The way this has been developing, the whole feel of it has changed drastically. I think it looked a lot better when the shading was dark and eerie. Now it just seems really flat and uninteresting. I think you could make this nice and creepy if you go back a bit towards the old kinda face.

Yup... ;)
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