Thanks, I appreciate the comments. Now to work on the flaws.
I doubt, though, that I'll ever get very detailed with my iso art. The entire appeal for me is the charming, simplified, retro look. I will certainly work on the consistency, the composition, and the shading, but I plan to keep it pretty light on detail for reasons of personal taste.
I'm probably all over the place here. I'm also colorblind, which is challenging. I actually took some photos of the bedroom so that I could color-drop from the reference pics.
Just looking for some:
1. General C&C 2. Advice on putting wrinkles in the comforter 3. Color advice 4. Punishment
Also, should my carpet be dithered somehow? Is there like a reference for standard fabric dither patterns that you could point me to?