Looks better, but the patches are a bit too uneven in size and placement and there's some irregularities in the shading. Like the lower left part, there's a small patch in between the larger ones that sticks out because it breaks the dark shade. (I could point it out better in an edit, if I have time tomorrow.)
Also, try to keep outlines and the dark shades below the patches and not as much between them and avoid doing longer lines.