Dnilb, you should study Pistachio's versions thoroughly. For example, note the conflict created between hips and shoulders in the first one, I talked about this in the other thread, great way to create tension. Also note how powerful the stances are. These guys yell power, yours is a bit too default. The reference of the new one seems a bit weak to start with, so taking it over so verbatim does not seem smart.
Great improvements though, keep pushing your limits, you'll get there.