@Yosh: Thanks for the edits.
Yes, that's basically where I was going for with the light source.
I was trying to be a little hard on myself by doing it there...
I like your skin tone, the only thing I tink you missed was that the hands aren't hands but are instead balls of a hard substance (Rock, Steel)
But I do like your edit with the gloves.
The chest is a bit off, he seems to have a six pack where his pecks should be...
I really need to work towards not just shading the sides, and getting my pants for example to look like Kyles.
The pants look alot more realistic.
The only thing I don't like about Kyles is the palete.