Still, you're just editing what I did
Try and come up with your own look for the eyes and the head, and the body, taking into account the things that I said, rather than just mimicking my edit. Right now, he's almost exactly the same as my edit, save for a few changes. My changed were to give you a better idea of how to define your creation and how to make it make more structural sense, know what I mean?
Try to do more of your own thing
You're making progress, but I want to see that YOU can do your own thing, but just copy mine