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Offline Inlagd Pixel

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Behold: the NoHoHon

on: May 23, 2007, 12:24:25 pm
I love this japanese madness called NoHoHon so much, that I just couldn't resist to create one myself and here it is:



Any suggestions how to make it better are welcome. I suppose it should move more smoothly, maybe a bit faster, but I'm not sure about it.

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Re: Behold: the NoHoHon

Reply #1 on: May 23, 2007, 04:58:02 pm
outside-lines need AA'
« Last Edit: May 23, 2007, 07:10:42 pm by Draco9898 »

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Re: Behold: the NoHoHon

Reply #2 on: May 23, 2007, 07:29:18 pm
outside-lines need AA'

No, they do not. AA on the "outside lines" should only be used if you are having a fixed bg, which clearly, this isn't the case.

As for crits, this could use a better palette. The difference between the darkest and second darkest pink is so big the inner AA doesn't work at all.
The head could use a more perfect circle, as it looks jaggy and weirdly angled. Overall it could use cleaner lines (for the same reason).
The animation shouldn't go faster as those toys are really slow, but indeed it could be a tad smoother.