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First RPG-Style Sprite

on: March 12, 2007, 04:17:50 pm
(The eyes turned out transparent... I don't know why, as my transparent color is purple...)
It isn't for any specific game, but I thought it would be good to try this out.

I was going for a very relaxed look... Does it work?

I might need help shading the beanie. At the moment it looks a bit too... cyllindrical. Maybe I could try and dither it, and see how that looks. And I could have raised his hand-in-pocket a little bit, maybe. I also forot to shade the arms... Is it common to only only notice these things once I actually post them? ;D

This is only my third piece, and it shows. So blast all that constructive critisism my way, I take it with open arms :D
« Last Edit: March 13, 2007, 03:03:28 pm by Hedgehog »
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Re: First RPG-Syle Sprite

Reply #1 on: March 13, 2007, 01:14:12 pm
... Is it common to only only notice these things once I actually post them? ;D...
You'll find you notice alot of small little areas you forgot to refine or that need updates/tweaking once you show it to other people or upload it and take a look at it.

For a 3rd sprite this is pretty good. He seems to be lacking a neck, though. the shirt shade could maybe use some more contrast, the arms seem too long, but you did a pretty nice job using the lightsource.

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Re: First RPG-Style Sprite

Reply #2 on: March 13, 2007, 05:13:57 pm

Is that any better?

And does anybody know of any RPG-Style tutorials?
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Re: First RPG-Style Sprite

Reply #3 on: March 13, 2007, 05:26:35 pm
It's improved! I think it might could still use a bit more contrast... but I really like your style!

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Re: First RPG-Style Sprite

Reply #4 on: March 13, 2007, 07:45:04 pm
st0ven's site and tsugumo's tutorials are both good launching platforms
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Re: First RPG-Style Sprite

Reply #5 on: March 13, 2007, 11:17:23 pm
Adarias: this is obviously based on St0ven's sprite art tutorial, so he already knows ;)

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Re: First RPG-Style Sprite

Reply #6 on: March 14, 2007, 12:31:58 am
really? i haven't read either in a few years.
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Re: First RPG-Style Sprite

Reply #7 on: March 14, 2007, 04:12:23 am



These are St0ven's from the tutorial

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Re: First RPG-Style Sprite

Reply #8 on: March 14, 2007, 01:12:48 pm
Yeah, I read that turorial last week. I can't find the URL again, though... Forgot how I got to it :-[
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Re: First RPG-Style Sprite

Reply #9 on: March 14, 2007, 02:49:31 pm
its all off of spriteart.com
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Re: First RPG-Style Sprite

Reply #10 on: March 14, 2007, 04:11:04 pm
I think I was at a different site...
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Re: First RPG-Style Sprite

Reply #11 on: March 14, 2007, 04:17:42 pm
http://www.spriteart.com/tutorials/02_rpg_hero.html

So unless you saw it mirrored somewhere it must be from spriteart.com

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Re: First RPG-Style Sprite

Reply #12 on: March 14, 2007, 05:48:57 pm
Damn, my bad.

I thought it was different because at first I googled sprite art tutorials (or something like that...) and I landed on the tutorial page. I never saw the home page.

Well, does anyone have any more critisism?
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