roll of megaman help

[pixelarg]

i make this:

is roll of megaman legends (thats right?)
and I want to improve as much as possible

any suggestions or edition is welcome !!!

[vinegarstroke]

the colour scheme is really nice, it's got a really nice GBA feel to it. I think her left foot somehow needs to be fattened a tad as it looks a little too thin at the moment.

the pose and facial expression seem a little too static right now, i think i remember roll being quite flirty/bubbly, so maybe that needs to come out more in the style.

hope this helps

[ndchristie]

sorry for a quick post - that piece of hair...can you have a single bang? i want to call it a forelock...but she's not a horse...it's reading as a unibrow because the blonde doesn't separate successfully from the skin tones.

the shoulders make her look very uncomfortable.  slack them, and give her some neck i think...actually the whole shadow under the chine is kinda confusing, that maybe should be more imprtant to change, bring it into real hair, chin, and neck rather than dark mess (it turns into a little goiter-type thing now because it just expands to fill...)

agree with sporty-boppy idea

[pixelarg]

This is most good? and now? xD (the right is the improve version)

[ndchristie]

you're making it more and more eyebrows.  separation is not something that happens with a single-pixel dark line.



this whole section is not working, it's impossible to see what's going on and it just blurs into dark chub .

Now that i think about it the mouth is really distracting too and not adding too much.  she looks very rough+dirty somehow in a way that really fights against the idea of megaman or even just being female.

[pixelarg]

waaa is hard x) you can make a lil edit? xD

[vinegarstroke]

I've tried to separate the shoulders from the hair and also added the darkest hair colour in that big blotch of purply shadow as well. Also changed the face a bit, sorry for the quick and dirty edit