Concept for a personal mental endeavor of mine.


Tried a second one. I think some things I did better, while others worked out nicer on the first one.



Personal crits:

- Left (his right) foot is just fucked. Feet are weird.
- I think I made him too fat, he was supposed to be more like a muscular fat, not obese fat.
- Man boobs are uneven... didn't catch this until after scanning. Fuck.
- Attempt at some perspective using on this kinda failed... it was supposed to be as if you were like the height of his toe looking up at him... think I know how I could better achieve this next time though.
- As a result of the last crit, the head turned out different than I wanted, I like the first head more, but that's really just personal preference.

It's suppose to have a relation to this:

Thong wearing bank robber anyone?

On it.

EDIT:   

Balls.

Really, the thing that seems to work against you in these is the overtexturing on the tiles. It makes the whole thing look chaotic, which in turn makes the readability of the whole scene just that much harder. I don't think they all need to be simplified, but some that need to make up large chunks of terrain should be less detailed in order to prevent pulling the attention away from the characters. Like in the town shot, all the areas with the bricks are just pulling your eyes in too many directions at once.

I dunno, maybe just work with the level of detail on them a bit and keep it in mind for when you make new areas.

I'm in.

Likes: Surrealism, music, cute birds, skeletons. Find a way to work with that and you will be my God.

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