Hi guys ! 

I was trying to make some poses from a already finished character (his overall image), and I want to ask you guys to criticise this one



Character I was trying to make a pose.

Hope I helped! I know I had a lot of criticism, but I really do think they look great, and I especially love the question mark tee on the little guy! They just need a little refining is all.

I was hopping that someone will critique my work
I was struggeling with the colors, so this video helped me atleast how can I ("level" down or up those color depending on the light (dark area, bright area))

I tried to make the same color pattern according to your correction (find those colors on my own. It's pretty unfair to use already finished art without struggeling with it )
Filling this gap between arm and body is a really good idea (it just look a lot better) + deleting outlines (I was just used to my old works )

This is my second attempt (also I fixed a bit this kid, I think it looks pretty decent now.)



and I tried to make this guy look better but I have a filling that his arm is kind a off. Maybe it's just me. I'll try to change it
later, this is just a leak (don't edit it !!!)



PS. I also thought about changing a bit his arm (her is a second version)

So yea being a pixel artist. I wanted to be and pixel artist to but when I was drawing it was all time a failure (even my 12 years old sister was drawing better ...) so I left it for a while then came back and doing nonsense imitation of pixel character or something similar to it. Huh I guess I am a little bit upset of myself well ignore it ... But the thing I want to say is that you must to spend a lot of time drawing.

If it's your first pixel art (or any attempt) then good job really ! Because thinking about what size will fit katana, shape (I suck at it ...). I tried my best to make this problem part as good as it's possible from me




Ps. here is a link where a pixel artist is doing shading on characters (maybe it will help you somehow)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MUwurlo9g3c

When I look at his wings I guess that they are okey but of course we want it a little bit better but I don't know what's the problem here. Is it a shape or animation ?

If we are talking about the shape I can give you some examples that wings look a little bit (for) more agresive or double it 1 pair are normal and a second pair are a little bit smaller

https://imgur.com/9yBleYF -------- (here is his real site) https://twitter.com/deadpixel666

Well about the art ;3 If I were you I would like to add here more barrels on the right with plug and some life on the street. And about the background you want to change it or leave it like this ?