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W.I.P Challenge on pixeljoint.

on: November 12, 2007, 08:12:27 pm


That is it so far.
C+C are welcome.

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Re: W.I.P Challenge on pixeljoint.

Reply #1 on: November 12, 2007, 09:10:02 pm
Are you supposed to be a pig? The colors a re a bit bright though. I think you should resketch the thing and make it well look more human.
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Re: W.I.P Challenge on pixeljoint.

Reply #2 on: November 13, 2007, 01:42:27 pm
I think that you should use darker shade colors. The face is now too flat.

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Re: W.I.P Challenge on pixeljoint.

Reply #3 on: November 13, 2007, 05:53:58 pm
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Re: W.I.P Challenge on pixeljoint.

Reply #4 on: November 13, 2007, 06:58:23 pm
those mr potato head eyes are freaking me out... can you not push them into the head abit more?

As for that freaky snout thing... and the shocking pink palllette I don't know what to say?
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Re: W.I.P Challenge on pixeljoint.

Reply #5 on: November 13, 2007, 07:52:28 pm
I done some, i am trying to make a body on the left,  near the blood, i will fix the eyes after i have done the body,

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Re: W.I.P Challenge on pixeljoint.

Reply #6 on: November 14, 2007, 05:35:38 pm
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Re: W.I.P Challenge on pixeljoint.

Reply #7 on: November 14, 2007, 06:49:48 pm
This suffers of too many fundemental flaws to continue with in my opinion. It's too flat, the colours arent well picked, it doesn't really look like a pig, and so on.
I'd say redo the entire thing, and pay more attention to how a pig and a human actually look like, and how they're coloured.
Here's a suggestion:

(Don't mind the jagged lines, I'm just too lazy to remove em)

I added volume to it, more accurate colours, more realism. And I still kept it cartoony. It's a quick sketch, but you get the point I hope.

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Re: W.I.P Challenge on pixeljoint.

Reply #8 on: November 16, 2007, 09:30:29 pm
Latest update:

Defined the cheek bone more, eyebrows colour edit and fixed some other things.

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Re: W.I.P Challenge on pixeljoint.

Reply #9 on: November 16, 2007, 10:02:29 pm
The middle shade makes the face look flat and embossed. Here's a good reference for the lighting you have (even though it human not a pig but it shows the principles).