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[WIP] Saturos Redux
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HMC
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[WIP] Saturos Redux
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July 27, 2007, 02:19:39 pm
One of the villains from Golden Sun for the GBA. This piece is a revisit of
a piece I did over a year ago
. I would normally wait until after I'm done before requesting comments and criticisms, but I'm too stubborn to change art after I've declared it finished.
Reference pic:
http://mundodjinn.webcindario.com/personajes/saturos.gif
I'm mostly concerned about the arms. I have never really learned anything about how to draw the human anatomy beyond the rules of thumb for the male facial structure, so some it might look a little wonky. Also, I haven't decided how I want to do the cape yet, nor what I want to do with the background.
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dille
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Re: Saturos Redux (WIP)
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July 27, 2007, 03:15:18 pm
There seems to be some problems with anatomy. His arms are way too short! I also think his upper body is too short.
I really like the face, but it does not look like your reference. I also like the overall coloring!
Keep it up!
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HMC
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Re: Saturos Redux (WIP)
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July 27, 2007, 03:53:15 pm
Well, keeping the face the same wasn't really my intention. I'm more so trying to stay true to the character itself than the actual art style.
I guess I do see that the torso is a little short (and thus the arms as well). I'll get on that.
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HMC
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Re: Saturos Redux (WIP)
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July 27, 2007, 08:52:24 pm
Made him a fair bit taller, and extended the length of his arms. Getting closed to finished, I think (aside from the cape and background). Any last minute niggles at this point would be swell.
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Helm
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Re: [WIP] Saturos Redux
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July 27, 2007, 10:32:45 pm
Edited the original in photoshop. First of all, smaller head. The human male adult body is about 7 heads tall + head head.
study anatomy earnestly.
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HMC
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Re: [WIP] Saturos Redux
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July 27, 2007, 10:56:50 pm
Thank you, Helm. This is really helpful.
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Re: [WIP] Saturos Redux
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July 28, 2007, 01:01:18 am
No problem, here to help.
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