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[C+C please] Column

on: October 14, 2006, 04:48:48 pm
A little practice I've just done. The palette was borrowed from Secret Of Evermore.


CC are welcome and so are edits


Just for fun, C64 :
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Re: [C+C please] Column

Reply #1 on: October 14, 2006, 07:33:45 pm
Oh, I almost forgot the reference :

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Re: [C+C please] Column

Reply #2 on: October 14, 2006, 07:45:18 pm
No no on the double post.
Very nice colors..It's missing a little sometihng though.

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Re: [C+C please] Column

Reply #3 on: October 14, 2006, 11:46:46 pm
It needs a lot more polishing, see if you can integrate some of the weathering and damage that's on your reference. The palette is pretty plain, the darker colors are too close and very dull, even for background art.

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Re: [C+C please] Column

Reply #4 on: October 14, 2006, 11:51:33 pm
Heres an example of a great pillar: 



not too many colors - give a nice effect too.

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Re: [C+C please] Column

Reply #5 on: October 15, 2006, 05:30:32 pm
I wish I could pixel like Kenneth Fejer does...


Update :



Brand new palette + damages on the column

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Re: [C+C please] Column

Reply #6 on: October 15, 2006, 05:51:17 pm
I wish I could pixel like Kenneth Fejer does...

dont we all.

the weathered version is much better.

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Re: [C+C please] Column

Reply #7 on: October 15, 2006, 10:38:06 pm
I really like the colours of the update fil. I think you'd be better off not having cuts that go all the way through the image, or it looks like the pillar is paper-thin - make them more like dents basically.

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Re: [C+C please] Column

Reply #8 on: October 16, 2006, 06:01:32 pm
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Experiment with the palette more, aa to dark where you don't have it. I like this lots.

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Re: [C+C please] Column

Reply #9 on: October 17, 2006, 06:59:52 pm
Thank you so much Helm !
Your edit made me understand quite a few things and it is really really beautiful.

I won't edit the piece anymore, it's just a practice and I don't like spending a long time on the same piece. This one taught me much =)