Hmm, I also agree with most of the mob regarding the "uniqueness" of this piece, Ryu.
My advice would be for you not to quit on this; try making a real effort to understand these crits. No one says that you can't add style, however, this guy could really use a major tune up anatomically.
Hmmm, other than that, I'm liking the colours- especially on the guy's hair and (his) left arm.